Those spin GOE's are too high. His Camel is clearly a 0 at most. -1 would be fair because of how much speed he loses in it, along with the positions being average. The sit spin is 0 or +1, if you want to credit the jump feature as being well done. Nothing else about that spin was above average.
His jump layout is perfectly fine like this. He is backloading 5 jumping passes, including all the combinations. That's a huge change for him. He doesn't need more than one Quad and he doesn't need a Triple Flip.