Anyone could ground-truth a short FS eerie story?

lariko

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I honestly don’t know where it is appropriate to ask, but i needed to write an eerie story about use of technology, so I wrote one about figure skating. I am a noob however, so if someone could read it for not messing up figure skating related terms and events, I would be grateful. It is only 1K words long.

It is amateur hour, obviously, but, well, personal development, heh. There is no romance or anything embarrassing or real people related.
 

skylark

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I'd love to read your story! I can check for figure skating terminology and events ... but I'm not very tech-smart.
 

lariko

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Thank you! I will send you a google doc link, if you can read those? I’d love to polish the story as much as possible. :)
 
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