There are many levels of "critique" and forgive me to say that IMO, subjectively pointing out negative aspects is the most easiest critique.The latter is called a critique; ...therefore use advice about what needs to be improved.
If your post #11 was meant to be of any advice to Fumie, you could have ended your words with "I wish Fumie will do that" instead of "I wish Fumie had done that" so that she won't take it as bashing (like I got the impression), but encouragement. She reads English perfectly well you know.