I wonder what would the author of this Russian essay say if they saw the first version of Nathan’s FS? For me the step sequence is still the most beautifully done in that version. And the music cut too really.
I also find the ISP1 version to be the most exquisitely musical, especially the step sequence. Out of curiosity I made a
side-by-side comparison video of Nathan's steps at ISP1 and Worlds, in which the little things I love about the ISP1 edition really stand out.
Exhibit 1: the sequence of lunge-twizzles-Mohawk at ~10" in the debut version is so cleverly tailored to the music in the debut. I didn't know I could be so impressed by the musical intention of such a simple move as a Mohawk but I was. Whereas in the Worlds version they just let go of the musical opportunity to make place for the right foot cluster
Exhibit 2: The choctaw in the ISP skate at ~18" is also well placed in relation to the music, although I do like the placement of the choctaw in the Worlds edition as well (~21")
Exhibit 3: The one foot glide with a little port de bras at ~22" has to be one of my favorite moments in the entire program. Nathan's extended body lines and phrasing make me feel as if I just took a deep breath. The spread eagle just doesn't quite work the same way
Exhibit 4: After his one-foot cluster on the right (~28"), again a simple mohawk works musical wonders in the first version. Kudos to keeping the bracket in the same place though. Such a nice way to respond to the chord.
Exhibit 5: Did anyone notice they changed the one-foot cluster on the left from rocker-counter-bracket to bracket-counter-rocker? I liked the little hold on the bracket in the original version, although the side lunge in the Worlds version is also beautiful (and in a more ostensible way).
Exhibit 6: Maybe one of my favorite changes in the *new* version: the placement of the (second? third?) lunge and the loop. The updated arm movement on that lunge (or what Kurt Browning calls a "back drag") phrases the music well. The entrance of the LFO-loop coincides with the beginning of a musical phrase, and its exit overlays with a chord as well. The port de bras that follows grabs my attention and signals the end of the step sequence, which I appreciate as well.
All this being said, as much as I prefer the musical subtlety of the original version, I suspect they (Shae, Nathan, and whoever else on the team) might feel it's
too subtle, and decided to add some more noticeable choreography (such as the side lunge with hand-gazing). Also the old version has higher demand on musical timing, and it won't work if Nathan misses one musical phrase, whereas in the new version the steps look beautiful as long as he performs each move with purpose and intention.