Our reviews will always be based on our individual perceptions and mine was not based on Jason's whiteness. It's just the smoothness and fluidity which characterize Jason's skating which for me is the antithesis of the Sinnerman of Alvin Ailey and Nina Simone. I felt like he didn't quite capture the throbbing vitality of the piece, though I quite enjoyed it.
Thanks for the specificity of your subjective impressions. I don't recall seeing an earlier critique by you, so I wasn't necessarily referencing your comments in my previous posts. The wonderful thing is that we all perceive differently, and that's normal.
The fact that all creative projects remain 'works-in-progress,' means that Jason's and Rohene's work together (especially being skating choreography) can and will change over time. Jason skated to
Riverdance throughout the fall of 2013. By the time he reached U.S. Nationals in early 2014, as we know, he was loaded for bear! The work and his endurance had been honed, fine-tuned and enhanced, and it showed.
As we know, this has been an abnormal season in which skaters have not had a chance to compete and to 'marinate' their programs at multiple competitions. The fact that the skaters for the most part skated as well as they did at a modified U.S. Nat'ls, is remarkable in and of itself. Of course, not every athlete appeared to be fit and well-trained. But most were able to meet the challenge, even despite not having had the opportunity to train and compete at their usual pace throughout the season. Training in Canada, Jason, as we know in particular, did not have as many competitive opportunities this season as other U.S. athletes.
Regarding 'capturing throbbing vitality,' for me that's in the 'eye of the beholder.' It's important to remember too that it's possible to be inspired by ballet or by modern dance creations, but translating those inspirations to the ice is a complicated process. It's not necessary, nor is it possible to exactly recreate a work from one medium in a different medium. Neither should that be the goal. Also it should be kept in mind that a different version of the music and lyrics was utilized by Rohene to create something inspired by what he saw in Ailey's
Sinnerman (and indeed that he heard in Nina Simone's voice).
In any case, I doubt that Rohene was trying to capture 'throbbing vitality.' He was most likely moved by something else. One person's 'throbbing vitality,' could be another person's 'mesmerizing fluidity and charisma.' Plus, Rohene bringing his vision of
Sinnerman to the ice as transmuted through Jason's embodiment, is certainly going to look different and encompass something of Jason's personality and movement style.
It is incredibly difficult to translate something as outstanding as a seminal Ailey piece to the ice. The arm positions and some of the obviously referential transitions give it away in terms of inspiration - but I would hope they do more than this to translate Nina Simone's Sinner Man to the ice, which is what matters. Otherwise, it's just a poor knock-off. No one really watches Disney on Ice either.
Yes, an important aspect to keep in mind is that Ailey's
Sinnerman is part of a larger modern dance epic masterpiece. Still, I disagree with your complaints in that I do not think Rohene was trying to capture Ailey's vision with exact specificity and fidelity. Nor was he even attempting to translate Ailey's epic work to the ice. Rohene was more likely moved by some feeling or flavor or movement sequence that stirred his imagination and spurred him to think about how to create a similar feeling and movement style, with different nuances, on the ice.
I'm not sure what you're getting at in complaining about them not 'translating Nina Simone's
Sinnerman to the ice.' They were not trying to do that either. What do you mean by 'a poor knockoff'? As I said earlier, the creative process is never a slam dunk. It is always a never-ending process. If you wish to be perfect, you will never take the first step. It is important to try, and to learn, and to hone, and to fail, and to begin again, and to never give up.
One key thing of utmost importance for creators to do, is to ignore the critics, and the braying noise by those who haven't engaged in the hard work that has been and is being put into the creative process. Nor are the critics sweating blood and tears in the arena.
It is so easy to sit back and criticize. I include myself in this admonishment, as I am not immune to complaining and criticizing the performances and creative work of others. But at least, I take a step back and temper my comments and judgments, and I try to qualify and to be fair in my reflections. I understand that I'm not the one making the creative decisions, nor am I in possession of every factor involved in the decision-making process that athletes and artists go through.