Her new programs are nice.
However, I could improve the choreography for the LP. Let's take a look at how
Blades of Passion fixes programs. Here is what her current LP looks like as a reference:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jvHe11Af35M
*The Triple Flip needs to go. She can never do this jump. I think she's landed it like once in her entire career?
*She should do her Layback spin after the first Triple Loop. It goes better with this section of the music and replaces The Triple Flip in this part of the program.
*After the Layback, she should build up speed for the next series of moves. At 2:08 I like the downward flourish she does with her arms, but she should hold that edge for a second while raising her arms upward after the flourish. It would be a great highlight for that big drum beat and the following part of the music.
*She should have a lot of speed right now, so her next element directly after that highlight of choreography will be a 2Axel-2Toe-2Loop combination. This combination would go great with the next big pulse of music at 2:13, as well as the progression of notes afterward. Kiira is currently doing her Spiral Sequence during these last parts of the music I've detailed and I believe that's a mistake because her Spiral isn't a WOW move. It isn't the most effective choreography for this skater.
*After the 2Axel-2Toe-2Loop combination she should keep the speed up, because I want to see a Triple Salchow at 2:25 to go with the BANG of the music.
*After the Salchow she should be doing some forward progressives while moving her arms in the most joyful of fashion. Girl, you just conquered Argentina with that Salchow. Be happy!
*Next comes the Spiral Sequence, starting at 2:37. Instead of just doing one position like the current choreography, I want a classic forward spiral position followed by a backwards spiral with her hand on her leg. This will differentiate the new section of music, the gentle guitar (harp?) plucks, from the old section and set us up for the next tempo change.
*At 2:50 she should do running steps to create a spark in the now upbeat tempo, followed by that nice wiggle movement she is currently doing at 2:50. Except the wiggle should be done while moving rather than stationary, because she needs to be building up speed right now for her next jump.
*That next jump is a 3Loop-2Loop combination. She'll go back around the rink so that she is facing the judges while going into the combination, at the opposing side.
*After doing the jump, the landing will feed directly into the start of a Circular Step sequence. This is instead of the Straightline Step sequence she is currently doing. Kiira isn't very good at fiery straightline step sequences (her straightline in the SP is fine because it's a softer melody); a Circular Step will look better for her and also transition better.
*The step sequence needs to finish at 3:25 so we can move on to the change in melody. I'd like her to end the steps with a backbend that she will hold while slowly gliding backwards in order to transition into this new gentle melody. She can then skate around doing simple strokes and a couple simple arm movements while softly building up speed to do a lovely spread eagle at 3:40.
*After the spread eagle she can take some strokes towards the end of the rink she had previously been traveling in and quickly loop back around to do a Double Axel in the middle of the rink at 3:51. The rest of the choreography from that point on to end the program would be the same as it is currently (the OMG dramatic pose and then combination spin).